Luckytime's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[my other masterpiece]

Hitler would be disappointed.

Horsenwelles responds:

whats up with jews?

[THe Fluffy Furball: Koinu]

Wow! How did you get the effect of hard light? Did you choose all the colors from the start or did you use some sort of preset?

SignHerePlease responds:

Colors as per everypicture were picked as I went on, I just go with the flow sadly...
Any effect Aside from the WHITE highlights on her body aren't actually effects, I painted those with normal brushes...

Ok maybe with a lil help with color dodge...

[Whore Of Babylon]

I like the simplistic style and monochromatic theme. My only complaint is her eye is way too low which makes it look weird.

Indeimaus responds:

I like weird :3

[Al Vuelo]

I don't like the composition. The "camera" is zoomed so far out as if the focus of the drawing is the landscape, but you put half as much effort in the landscape that you put into the tiny figure. The end result looks like a jumbled landscape with a person who doesn't feel like they belong in it.

Sorry for the harsh words. I do feel that they would be excellent separately, and everything else about it is good. Just try to keep to one style, like if you created the landscape fast and loosely and kept the shadows ambiguous, do the same thing for the flying dude.

Voinaimir responds:

That's a solid observation - the figure was actually remarkably slapdash, while most of the time on this piece was spent on the clouds.
Still - I see what you're saying, and thanks for the review!

[Samus Aran]

Damn good...

...at first glance. But there are little things like that hand that don't look right. Still a great effort, especially for not tracing. I agree, there's no originality in tracing, why bother creating something if someone already did it first? There's nothing to gain from it.

Geodracula responds:

Thank you for the constructive review :)
I agree about the hand! I'm not going to lie, I hate drawing hands and feet! Since actually drawing this (about a week or so ago) I've been practising hands and feet, so hopefully I can return to Samus one day and give her better hands :)

I've seen a few pieces on this site where people have openly admitted tracing and I've never understood why you'd trace, anyone can trace really :S

[Lolita]

Needs more cranium

Very cute but the head keeps bothering me... and the nose doesn't look as feminine as it should either. Otherwise, I'd fap!

LovelyKouga responds:

Thanks for the crit!
Like I said it's only a sketch, and I purposefully give her a rather large nose because I don't want her to be TOO cute, ya know? Anime characters look so perfect all the time, I go out of my way sometimes to do things differently!
And FAP?! Dude...ew.