Luckytime's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Anxious Faces (BW)]

This is BALLER. Reminds me of insanely twisted shadow planet, a game which I loved. It's really fun to look at, excellent work.

ZippyTheWicked responds:

Thanks a bunch yo! I remade this same piece in color too, so I'll upload that once i fix the colors a bit. And I'll def look that game up

[BLUE - Speedie]

The first review leaves a hint to the fate of this piece. It's well executed, for sure, but if someone can't describe what they're looking at then that's bad conveyance.

Kamikaye responds:

I just like to hear people's interpretations what they see in pieces.

[Alpha Charlie Tango Delta]

Dear god, this is excellent.

G3no responds:

glad you enjoyed, lime

[Mourning Garden]

Values are good, I like the color scheme but then its distribution seems kinda random. And her left arm is a little big. You did a good job separating the girl from the background, which seems to be harder than it should be for some people.

ZaneZansorrow responds:

Yeahn I was coloring based on the mood of the song but dang I'm starting to see her left arm as kinda big too. (Well mostly kinda long in the forearm area) Thanks for the critique :{3

[Ember prime]

Great detail, just gotta work on those body proportions. The legs are too thick and the arms are too short. If this was "quick" I'd like to see something that took you some time.

immaboreddude responds:

I see what you are saying but the thick legs, they are kinda part of her design so I can't do much about it. I will try to keep an eye on the arms thought and Thanks for taking some time to review my work I really appreciate it.

[The Tough Truth]

This is bonkers good (I always need new adjectives to use when I see good art). This was clearly derived from passion.

RussFairchild responds:

Thank you very much =D

[Dandy VS. Worm]

Fantastic! I hope you get greenlit.

Buzzwerd responds:

Thanks! Me too :P (Edit* We did!!)

[elliot]

There's nothing wrong with the art itself but... If you're set on doing this with your free time and you want to upload it here then I can't stop you. I enjoying drawing hentai myself, but there are sites dedicated to that stuff, y'know? I just think... do we need to turn newgrounds, one of the only bastions for growing artists into another one of those? I have plenty of nsfw drawings on my hard drive, but I plan on uploading those to other sites out of respect for the artists here who are seeking a more professional environment. And this goes for all the other nsfw artists out there, I just felt like posting it here. Think about it.

nitrile responds:

nah.

[Technical Insect Collage]

This is nostalgic for me, I used to have a 'how to draw bugs' book with step by step pictures and I think your bugs are actually better. I just don't know why you half-colored them.

MojoRising responds:

Thanks! most have just spot colour to illuminate particular markings, the rest uncoloured to maintain the technicality and finesse of the pointillism.

[May heaven grant you fortune]

What a stunner, I liked that game. And I see you turned him into a robot. Is it because the voice said he needs to shed his humanity? Or you just felt like it? Anyway I'm sure we'll see this picture on their website soon enough. It's too good.

Carrion responds:

I just always imagined the protagonist to be some sort of android because of the lil antenna on his head. Thank you!