Luckytime's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Comm: Anonymous (SFW)]

Why does your logo look exactly like Star Bomb's down to the font?

BlueBreed responds:

Holy Fuck D: I SWEAR that was a coincendence!!

[11h53]

YES. For an experiment this looks really fancy. First thing I noticed was the lighting ripping through from the left, totally nailed it. Was the title the name of the original doc?

Cairos responds:

Thanks man. I originally named this Landing but didn't really stick with it.

[Christina Lucci - Remembrance Day Poster]

Here you go: http://i.imgur.com/5uvSHbH.png
With great power comes great responsibility.

swaenK responds:

I think the eye might need to be in a millimeter to the left. <tried moving idk>

looks better tho I'd say. idk It will forever haunt me

edit: pixlred it to what I believe is dead center

yes I do believe I have found dead center, yours was a tad bit high.

[Evil]

When I squint my eyes it looks like something's trying to burst out of his head. It really creeps me out, great job!

ahmonza responds:

thanks man i intend to creep

[ALEXANDRITE]

Overall it's got a good feel to it, but I do have a few things to say.
It looks as if you ran out of room at the bottom and scrunched up the body so it would fit, the pelvis is way lower than that. The arms should be coming out of her side, not her back. Don't sacrifice accuracy for convenience. And lastly the hands look a bit wobbly, I recommend practicing those more.

Dullahanastasia responds:

Thank you so much!
Ahh definitely. It was somehow just annoying trying to fit her onto the page. But yeah, this is surely a sloppy piece and I knew it was gonna turn out like this as I worked on it. ;_;

But overall lessons learned: 1. Don't rush a piece the night before anything so I can create better quality stuff and 2. Hands shall be the bane of my existence; therefore I'm going to start doing hand exercises to get those little appendage fuckers right.

Again, thank you so much for the critique luckylime and for aiding me to better myself as an artist~!

[Fallen]

Only complaint I got is I feel like if her eyeballs are getting that much shadow then the face around the eyes should be darker to match that. Keep up the phenomenal work.

Neutronboar responds:

Hi.Yes I can see that now. Thank you.

[on the rooftop]

The scene is messy but the way it was constructed is so orderly :)
I feel like the satellite dish is drawing some of the focus away by being so bright. Maybe if it was turned a little bit it wouldn't stand out so much?

radshoe responds:

I appreciate the advice. Thanks for reviewing my art again! ;)

[Robo monk]

Didn't I tell you it was good? ;)

BazookaBonsai responds:

Will never doubt you again m8.

[Syria]

Interesting composition. Only thing I can say about this piece is careful about drawing eyes too narrow. This is an assumption but I think since you're Asian you tend to draw eyes more like your own when he's supposed to look like he's from Syria. Whatever the reason, they look a little stretched.

zephyo responds:

ah yeah I'm asian, you might be right. His face also kinda looks flat and chubby. Well, gotta seperate those ethnicities

[Coronation]

Jesus, this is like the artistic equivalent of going ham. The colors are above and beyond. I'm digging pretty everything except the red petals. They look flat and fake and don't seem to fit with the rest of the image. The pattern on the path could also use a little work to look more natural, it starts repeating around the middle and it could use more shadows in the cracks.

airman4 responds:

Thanks lol

For the critique
Yeah i didnt got much idea for the ground , so i keeped putting them around
I put red flower cause the people wanted me to show some joyfulness in the art , so i did them
I should probably vary more but honestly i was exhausted at the end lol
Making off can be viewed here
http://k-hermann.deviantart.com/art/Coronation-and-return-making-off-565578773

thanks