Luckytime's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Larva]

Nice drawing but there's no need for the drop shadow and duplicate. They don't add anything.

[Alpha Charlie Tango Delta]

Dear god, this is excellent.

G3no responds:

glad you enjoyed, lime

[Mourning Garden]

Values are good, I like the color scheme but then its distribution seems kinda random. And her left arm is a little big. You did a good job separating the girl from the background, which seems to be harder than it should be for some people.

ZaneZansorrow responds:

Yeahn I was coloring based on the mood of the song but dang I'm starting to see her left arm as kinda big too. (Well mostly kinda long in the forearm area) Thanks for the critique :{3

[Will of the Universe]

I like the stippling and the colors are very nice. I always say this but there's no reason to make something that big unless you're going to print it or use it for wallpaper.

[Yellow House]

It really looks like a cartoon from my shows as a kid, especially when I look at the bushes on the left. The textures could be cleaner and some of the lines should be straighter but it's really nice.

[Practice 2]

Your work is sooo gooood! Can't believe I didn't see it before. Your grasp on lighting is so much greater than mine that it's breaking my brain trying to figure out how you did stuff. Isnta-faved without a doubt.

[Gina - Commission]

Gorgeous! O0O

[Desmona]

How did I not review this yet!? This might be my favorite art piece of all time, it's perfect in every way.

[Break from chaos]

I didn't know this was you dude! Your stuff's all great, love the Isaac fanart.

[Ember prime]

Great detail, just gotta work on those body proportions. The legs are too thick and the arms are too short. If this was "quick" I'd like to see something that took you some time.

immaboreddude responds:

I see what you are saying but the thick legs, they are kinda part of her design so I can't do much about it. I will try to keep an eye on the arms thought and Thanks for taking some time to review my work I really appreciate it.