Luckytime's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Umaru (Unfinished animation)]

I like it, real animation and whatnot. But the hand looks like it's slapping the cola bottle instead of grabbing it, which is confusing.

[Asterix Commission!]

This may not be relevant to the art as much as it is to art culture, but I'm disappointed by how the men all have different body types and proportions while the women only share one. The qualities of a character tell you about their personality. Giving someone orange hair and big feet for example makes them solely unique in that way, and allows you to attribute those qualities with their character as you become more familiar with them. So when someone makes all their women have one body type it shows a subconscious belief that a woman's looks take priority over her uniqueness as an individual. I'm not mentioning this because I have a problem with it, it's just the first thing that caught my attention.

As for the drawing, my biggest issue is that many of the lines are drawn with an awkward inflection. It reminds me of clip art which is probably a bad thing. A general rule for laying out characters in an environment is that you want them to stand out over the background. In this case you made almost all the background lines heavier than the character lines, which is the opposite of what you want to do.

doublemaximus responds:

I understand what you're saying, but I was only sticking to the original styles of the comics which I have no control over style. As for how the women seem 'generalized' by looking 'attractive', I was only doing what the commissioner asked, which was to make her and her sister 'more flattering' and redirected me to the women of the Asterix comics for me to take note on how a certain female character was drawn.

[Ryūko Matoi Sprite v.2]

This one is definitely better.

What's more concerning is your outlook on people's criticism. On this and on your profile you only write about the hate you receive instead of framing it in a positive way. Hate is a strong word that you're throwing around unnecessarily. It's none of my business but you won't get very far in this world with that kind of outlook.

[Ryūko Matoi Sprite]

In response to your comment, while it's admirable of you to try to give her head the "correct" proportion, it still wouldn't make sense in real life. Her age is 17, so even irl she would have a bigger head than that. Anime styles do exaggerate, but you overcompensated here.

The other way to look at it is: you replicated the proportions for the rest of her body, so why did you only change the head? One way or the other you need to stay consistent for the style to work. Other than that, this is pretty dank.

morganstedmanmsNG responds:

I did get alot of requests to make the legs and arms smaller... (because making her head bigger is harder). I'll upload it later... if you think it's better... i'll delete this

[Mistle]

Tbh I didn't even think twice when I saw this, it fits right in with your other works, which isn't a slam. It just is what it is. In fact take a look at the favorites of the guy below me. This is nothing compared to what most people come here to fap to.

Also, crop that shit right next time.

[Devimon]

It doesn't feel authentic enough... needs more random belts.

But ya seriously I fucking love your art style and the way you vary line weights.
Keep kicking ass. (b^_^)b

[jeeper's peepers]

About the art, there are too many mid tones for me personally, but you did a good job with the parts you did work on.

On a different note, I think the fact that everyone fills a different niche is fascinating. I wish I knew why certain people draw creepy stuff for example while others draw primarily cute stuff, or sexy stuff, or "cool" stuff. Your content is a direct reflection on what is in your head, that's why I love it so much.

MrCreeep responds:

Totally agree about those midtones. Note taken, thanks for the feedback! BTW awesome art dude!

[A Mother's Pain]

You draw faces so well! You can see the emotion pouring out of the creases of her brows. I love that the mother's face seems to be the only thing in turmoil, the environment and the girl in her lap look very serene in contrast, almost angelic. It really brings out the focus of this piece a lot more.

[Vault Meat]

That's a nice environment, the woman's proportions are off though. I would suggest studying more anatomy.

[Bulma]

Bulma is one of the characters that appeals to me design-wise, and I think you nailed it all except the hairline/dome and the maybe the ear a little bit. I hate the word but she's definitely got a waifu vibe for me.