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The anatomy is rather good in all areas except for the navel (needs to be about midway between the nipples and the crotch, though this isn't true for everyone) and that, my god that FACE. I know anime is a popular style that's proved its appeal time and time again, but if you're going to draw a realistic body like that, the head should try to match it. Just tone down the cartoonyness of those eyes like 50%.

SolGoodguy responds:

Yeah, as I've grown used to it the face is a little bit lacking, thanks for your opinion.
Althought I disagree with changing too much of that. I barely have an artstyle but at least my characters I've tried to keep them to the somewhat same face, and thats probably why Elly's face looks a little weird in this one. Here's to hoping I find a good blend of both somewhere in between. As I go I get better and better with my grasp of anatomy so we'll get there someday.

I don't know how to judge this. The 1 star is because it's so different from everything else around here. What am I supposed to do with this? How am I supposed to feel about it? Is the fact that it's symmetrical on purpose or due to a limitation? If there were others making this type of art, how would this stack up against them? Is this type of art equally as valid as any other? I don't know.

plantm responds:

Here's a tag grouping for this style of art here on newgrounds. http://www.newgrounds.com/art/tag/fractal.

You have a good thumbnail here (how the picture looks when it's zoomed out) but it needs a lot of work when I look closer. One of the easier things to fix is to layer the grass so that it gives it some depth.

that-raccoon responds:

Thank you for the review! I made some edits to the grass to try and add more depth. It's always really big help when I receive feedback on my work, thank you!

Only 4.5 stars because I can see brush strokes. That may seem anal but that's what makes exceptional art. Also, are you making this available as a print?

RussFairchild responds:

I was purposely trying not to over work it, wanted to be really loose with this one. Thanks for the comment though =D

I'm curious how you make those dot patterns, do you do it pixel by pixel?

radshoe responds:

Yes that's exactly what I do. It's a little tedious and takes most of the time. Thanks for the comment! ;)

Judging by the website, the focus of the game isn't on her butt. But hey, it's the 21st century and openly expressing sexuality is a relatively new concept for society so I understand.
The game has got a little SuperGiant feel to it but it's very hard to tell what it's about right now. :\

Ephyse responds:

but but... but... i love butt ;_; XD !

I guess there's no need to get critiques on the forum since you got FP'd. It's good overall, but it's missing a little in a lot of areas. The left hand looks sweet and the expression is good, but the facial anatomy needs some work. You just need to refine your technique.

The biggest changes I would make are to add more detail to the shirt and pants, with everything else being relatively more detailed, his clothes draw unnecessary negative attention. The other thing would be to make the arm that's coming forward stand out more. You have a strong shadow on his face and rear arm, you should utilize that effect to separate the arm in the foreground from everything else. From the shoulder to about his elbow should be in shadow I'd say.

Basically what willcamick said, This has got a really nice and clean constructivism feel to it. The biggest strength though, is that it's well-composed. There's a rational distribution of elements throughout which keeps the viewer's attention.

GoshaDole responds:

Thanks~!

This is the reason I'm following you, I can tell you went all in on this one. so I'm going to judge it more harshly. It's just the way critique works.

The lines are still rough overall, which shouldn't have been too hard to clean up, it's so frustrating when you see something you like only to zoom in and notice all the flaws. You also lost some of Jasper's expression in the encoding process, she looks more tame here and her eyes don't seem to connect with Lapis' eyes. Nice job on Lapis' expression though, but her mouth looks super flat. It could use more dimension. Last of all, and the most unforgivable thing is that portion of the background in the top-right. Even if you traced it, even if you left it blank, that would be better than blatantly reusing it in your own work. I hate to see such hard work ruined by something like that.

CookieTheCrusher responds:

Thank you for the critique! I appreciate it!

Is this even original art? Is the artist even still around? I'm so confused.

If you're a fan of your own work, then you'll be fine ~ Start small. If you can't, then start smaller ~ If you don't love what you put out, don't expect anyone else to

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