Luckytime's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Fallen]

Only complaint I got is I feel like if her eyeballs are getting that much shadow then the face around the eyes should be darker to match that. Keep up the phenomenal work.

Neutronboar responds:

Hi.Yes I can see that now. Thank you.

[on the rooftop]

The scene is messy but the way it was constructed is so orderly :)
I feel like the satellite dish is drawing some of the focus away by being so bright. Maybe if it was turned a little bit it wouldn't stand out so much?

radshoe responds:

I appreciate the advice. Thanks for reviewing my art again! ;)

[Robo monk]

Didn't I tell you it was good? ;)

BazookaBonsai responds:

Will never doubt you again m8.

[Commission: Baryte]

Where the jaw connects to the ear is a little off, rest looks good though.

[Sig and Tessa]

Well, the fact that you threw in an army of Feed Me's gave me no choice but to review this.
Some of the foreshortening is over the top, for example Tessa's left eye should be about the same as the other since they're both in the same level of depth. The hammer handle looks especially extreme. Tessa's feet are farther apart yet they both seem to be the same height, looks like her thighs are causing this problem. That's the major stuff.

The rest is pretty good, the colors are balanced, the expressions are interesting and varied, and the focus is very well defined. Just gotta work on your sketch a bit longer.

[Spoopy Woods]

This is exactly what I wanted to see. Your characters are nice, but I think the real potential of your pixel art comes out when you put them in a fleshed out environment. Yes, it takes more time, but god dammit the idealist in me says it's worth it.

[Syria]

Interesting composition. Only thing I can say about this piece is careful about drawing eyes too narrow. This is an assumption but I think since you're Asian you tend to draw eyes more like your own when he's supposed to look like he's from Syria. Whatever the reason, they look a little stretched.

zephyo responds:

ah yeah I'm asian, you might be right. His face also kinda looks flat and chubby. Well, gotta seperate those ethnicities

[Inktober 11 to 20]

I like the last one the best, their design really pops out at me.

[Coronation]

Jesus, this is like the artistic equivalent of going ham. The colors are above and beyond. I'm digging pretty everything except the red petals. They look flat and fake and don't seem to fit with the rest of the image. The pattern on the path could also use a little work to look more natural, it starts repeating around the middle and it could use more shadows in the cracks.

airman4 responds:

Thanks lol

For the critique
Yeah i didnt got much idea for the ground , so i keeped putting them around
I put red flower cause the people wanted me to show some joyfulness in the art , so i did them
I should probably vary more but honestly i was exhausted at the end lol
Making off can be viewed here
http://k-hermann.deviantart.com/art/Coronation-and-return-making-off-565578773

thanks

[Professor Lorate]

HEYYY, you uploaded something! Cute little guy. How you been?