Luckytime's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Mistle]

Tbh I didn't even think twice when I saw this, it fits right in with your other works, which isn't a slam. It just is what it is. In fact take a look at the favorites of the guy below me. This is nothing compared to what most people come here to fap to.

Also, crop that shit right next time.

[Devimon]

It doesn't feel authentic enough... needs more random belts.

But ya seriously I fucking love your art style and the way you vary line weights.
Keep kicking ass. (b^_^)b

[jeeper's peepers]

About the art, there are too many mid tones for me personally, but you did a good job with the parts you did work on.

On a different note, I think the fact that everyone fills a different niche is fascinating. I wish I knew why certain people draw creepy stuff for example while others draw primarily cute stuff, or sexy stuff, or "cool" stuff. Your content is a direct reflection on what is in your head, that's why I love it so much.

MrCreeep responds:

Totally agree about those midtones. Note taken, thanks for the feedback! BTW awesome art dude!

[A Mother's Pain]

You draw faces so well! You can see the emotion pouring out of the creases of her brows. I love that the mother's face seems to be the only thing in turmoil, the environment and the girl in her lap look very serene in contrast, almost angelic. It really brings out the focus of this piece a lot more.

[Bulma]

Bulma is one of the characters that appeals to me design-wise, and I think you nailed it all except the hairline/dome and the maybe the ear a little bit. I hate the word but she's definitely got a waifu vibe for me.

[Animal Crossing Town]

Whoever voted 3 probably has lots of hentai in their favorites. This is very respectable and shows what hard work can do for you.

Notes:
The rhino/hippo lady in the front looked like a hello kitty gone wrong until I took a closer look. I would try making her nostril stand out less and add more definition to her face. The hedges in the foreground look good, but I don't know if they're necessary. They certainly don't need to be that noticeable anyway. I would have loved some cloud action up there, a lot of the sky/background space is wasted and makes it look spatially imbalanced. The well and the lamp post are perfect where they are, they add a nice asymmetry to the house. The house is way too dark, it's further back than the pine tree yet it's darker. The pine tree is seriously stunning... maybe my favorite part. Excellent overall, A+.

FelyneA responds:

Thank you for your detailed feedback! I appreciate it, I'm going to take your notes and use them to improve my next work.

[Fallout 4]

I like the way they're both turning their heads together, makes you wonder what they're looking at.
A little tip: Light usually get it's color from bouncing off colored objects so it's not often this saturated or localized. This makes it look like they're at a club. The dimmer the light the more saturated it can show up so you could've had some really cool looking effects by softening the atmospheric light and laying it down hard on the edges of the characters closer to the right.

pinkujira responds:

Thank you!! I will be sure to keep this in mind and apply it next time :)

[Evangelion Unit-02]

Really digging the light effects, like the shadow behind the robot. This kind style could be very good for storyboarding.

YakovlevArt responds:

Thank you. I hear storyboards are great work, but I've never done it.
I'll take the compliment.

[Light]

It's always a shame when an artist has nothing to say about their work. One of the things that fascinates me about art is why people make it. Or maybe it's the fact that I don't know how to feel about this, so I need something more.

In any case, the face looks fantastic, spot on... but then everything else is just kinda bland. I would classify this as a portrait, which I'm not too fond of. The perspective adds a little something, sure, but that's taken away by the hair which is completely missing. As far as I'm concerned you didn't draw the hair, you drew the outline of the hair. If I had any hints as to what you were thinking I would know how to judge this.