Luckytime's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Comm: Anonymous (SFW)]

Why does your logo look exactly like Star Bomb's down to the font?

BlueBreed responds:

Holy Fuck D: I SWEAR that was a coincendence!!

[11h53]

YES. For an experiment this looks really fancy. First thing I noticed was the lighting ripping through from the left, totally nailed it. Was the title the name of the original doc?

Cairos responds:

Thanks man. I originally named this Landing but didn't really stick with it.

[Christina Lucci - Remembrance Day Poster]

Here you go: http://i.imgur.com/5uvSHbH.png
With great power comes great responsibility.

swaenK responds:

I think the eye might need to be in a millimeter to the left. <tried moving idk>

looks better tho I'd say. idk It will forever haunt me

edit: pixlred it to what I believe is dead center

yes I do believe I have found dead center, yours was a tad bit high.

[Evil]

When I squint my eyes it looks like something's trying to burst out of his head. It really creeps me out, great job!

ahmonza responds:

thanks man i intend to creep

[Indivisible fan art competition]

Fancy colors. Like the person below said it does seem flat, there's a theme that runs through all your art which is that every character you draw looks like a standalone figure (kinda like an amiibo) and that becomes very apparent when you put a bunch of character together like this. There doesn't seem to be a focused light source, and they're all standing at the same 3/4 angle which takes the life out of them a bit.

Challenge yourself to do more unorthodox perspectives. Draw a character from the back occasionally, or the side, top or bottom. I will come in handy down the road.

[ALEXANDRITE]

Overall it's got a good feel to it, but I do have a few things to say.
It looks as if you ran out of room at the bottom and scrunched up the body so it would fit, the pelvis is way lower than that. The arms should be coming out of her side, not her back. Don't sacrifice accuracy for convenience. And lastly the hands look a bit wobbly, I recommend practicing those more.

Dullahanastasia responds:

Thank you so much!
Ahh definitely. It was somehow just annoying trying to fit her onto the page. But yeah, this is surely a sloppy piece and I knew it was gonna turn out like this as I worked on it. ;_;

But overall lessons learned: 1. Don't rush a piece the night before anything so I can create better quality stuff and 2. Hands shall be the bane of my existence; therefore I'm going to start doing hand exercises to get those little appendage fuckers right.

Again, thank you so much for the critique luckylime and for aiding me to better myself as an artist~!

[Fallen]

Only complaint I got is I feel like if her eyeballs are getting that much shadow then the face around the eyes should be darker to match that. Keep up the phenomenal work.

Neutronboar responds:

Hi.Yes I can see that now. Thank you.

[Robo monk]

Didn't I tell you it was good? ;)

BazookaBonsai responds:

Will never doubt you again m8.

[Commission: Baryte]

Where the jaw connects to the ear is a little off, rest looks good though.