Luckytime's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Animal Crossing Town]

Whoever voted 3 probably has lots of hentai in their favorites. This is very respectable and shows what hard work can do for you.

Notes:
The rhino/hippo lady in the front looked like a hello kitty gone wrong until I took a closer look. I would try making her nostril stand out less and add more definition to her face. The hedges in the foreground look good, but I don't know if they're necessary. They certainly don't need to be that noticeable anyway. I would have loved some cloud action up there, a lot of the sky/background space is wasted and makes it look spatially imbalanced. The well and the lamp post are perfect where they are, they add a nice asymmetry to the house. The house is way too dark, it's further back than the pine tree yet it's darker. The pine tree is seriously stunning... maybe my favorite part. Excellent overall, A+.

FelyneA responds:

Thank you for your detailed feedback! I appreciate it, I'm going to take your notes and use them to improve my next work.

[Fallout 4]

I like the way they're both turning their heads together, makes you wonder what they're looking at.
A little tip: Light usually get it's color from bouncing off colored objects so it's not often this saturated or localized. This makes it look like they're at a club. The dimmer the light the more saturated it can show up so you could've had some really cool looking effects by softening the atmospheric light and laying it down hard on the edges of the characters closer to the right.

pinkujira responds:

Thank you!! I will be sure to keep this in mind and apply it next time :)

[Evangelion Unit-02]

Really digging the light effects, like the shadow behind the robot. This kind style could be very good for storyboarding.

YakovlevArt responds:

Thank you. I hear storyboards are great work, but I've never done it.
I'll take the compliment.

[Light]

It's always a shame when an artist has nothing to say about their work. One of the things that fascinates me about art is why people make it. Or maybe it's the fact that I don't know how to feel about this, so I need something more.

In any case, the face looks fantastic, spot on... but then everything else is just kinda bland. I would classify this as a portrait, which I'm not too fond of. The perspective adds a little something, sure, but that's taken away by the hair which is completely missing. As far as I'm concerned you didn't draw the hair, you drew the outline of the hair. If I had any hints as to what you were thinking I would know how to judge this.

[Comm: Anonymous (SFW)]

Why does your logo look exactly like Star Bomb's down to the font?

BlueBreed responds:

Holy Fuck D: I SWEAR that was a coincendence!!

[11h53]

YES. For an experiment this looks really fancy. First thing I noticed was the lighting ripping through from the left, totally nailed it. Was the title the name of the original doc?

Cairos responds:

Thanks man. I originally named this Landing but didn't really stick with it.

[Christina Lucci - Remembrance Day Poster]

Here you go: http://i.imgur.com/5uvSHbH.png
With great power comes great responsibility.

swaenK responds:

I think the eye might need to be in a millimeter to the left. <tried moving idk>

looks better tho I'd say. idk It will forever haunt me

edit: pixlred it to what I believe is dead center

yes I do believe I have found dead center, yours was a tad bit high.

[Evil]

When I squint my eyes it looks like something's trying to burst out of his head. It really creeps me out, great job!

ahmonza responds:

thanks man i intend to creep

[Indivisible fan art competition]

Fancy colors. Like the person below said it does seem flat, there's a theme that runs through all your art which is that every character you draw looks like a standalone figure (kinda like an amiibo) and that becomes very apparent when you put a bunch of character together like this. There doesn't seem to be a focused light source, and they're all standing at the same 3/4 angle which takes the life out of them a bit.

Challenge yourself to do more unorthodox perspectives. Draw a character from the back occasionally, or the side, top or bottom. I will come in handy down the road.

[ALEXANDRITE]

Overall it's got a good feel to it, but I do have a few things to say.
It looks as if you ran out of room at the bottom and scrunched up the body so it would fit, the pelvis is way lower than that. The arms should be coming out of her side, not her back. Don't sacrifice accuracy for convenience. And lastly the hands look a bit wobbly, I recommend practicing those more.

Dullahanastasia responds:

Thank you so much!
Ahh definitely. It was somehow just annoying trying to fit her onto the page. But yeah, this is surely a sloppy piece and I knew it was gonna turn out like this as I worked on it. ;_;

But overall lessons learned: 1. Don't rush a piece the night before anything so I can create better quality stuff and 2. Hands shall be the bane of my existence; therefore I'm going to start doing hand exercises to get those little appendage fuckers right.

Again, thank you so much for the critique luckylime and for aiding me to better myself as an artist~!