Luckytime's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[no inspiration]

I'm curious how you make those dot patterns, do you do it pixel by pixel?

radshoe responds:

Yes that's exactly what I do. It's a little tedious and takes most of the time. Thanks for the comment! ;)

[Fan-Art -Spirit-]

Judging by the website, the focus of the game isn't on her butt. But hey, it's the 21st century and openly expressing sexuality is a relatively new concept for society so I understand.
The game has got a little SuperGiant feel to it but it's very hard to tell what it's about right now. :\

Ephyse responds:

but but... but... i love butt ;_; XD !

[Tetsuo]

I guess there's no need to get critiques on the forum since you got FP'd. It's good overall, but it's missing a little in a lot of areas. The left hand looks sweet and the expression is good, but the facial anatomy needs some work. You just need to refine your technique.

The biggest changes I would make are to add more detail to the shirt and pants, with everything else being relatively more detailed, his clothes draw unnecessary negative attention. The other thing would be to make the arm that's coming forward stand out more. You have a strong shadow on his face and rear arm, you should utilize that effect to separate the arm in the foreground from everything else. From the shoulder to about his elbow should be in shadow I'd say.

[Screenshot Redraw: Lapis and Jasper]

This is the reason I'm following you, I can tell you went all in on this one. so I'm going to judge it more harshly. It's just the way critique works.

The lines are still rough overall, which shouldn't have been too hard to clean up, it's so frustrating when you see something you like only to zoom in and notice all the flaws. You also lost some of Jasper's expression in the encoding process, she looks more tame here and her eyes don't seem to connect with Lapis' eyes. Nice job on Lapis' expression though, but her mouth looks super flat. It could use more dimension. Last of all, and the most unforgivable thing is that portion of the background in the top-right. Even if you traced it, even if you left it blank, that would be better than blatantly reusing it in your own work. I hate to see such hard work ruined by something like that.

CookieTheCrusher responds:

Thank you for the critique! I appreciate it!

[Newgrounds tank upgraded]

Is this even original art? Is the artist even still around? I'm so confused.

[mandy]

Mandy as a boy, as raven? Pick a damn theme.

nitrile responds:

nah, i'd rather just do whatever the fuck i want.

[Starbarians Commission for Adrien]

Quality. You do a great job capturing the premise of the story in one picture. Glad to hear you're still motivated to work on these guys.

[2h22]

This is the biggest canvas you've used yet, it's a sign of improvement. Not to mention you took on that sexy long hair.

Cairos responds:

Biggest canvas? Mmn, not exactly. The original size is much much larger. As for the hair I'm just glad I didn't have it billowing in the wind like usual.

[Game over]

I like the style of your work overall, it's a cool album art feel to it. It's not there yet but in 1 or 2 years you could be making some really eye-catching stuff.