Luckytime's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[street player]

So mesmerizing. You should have put the cat from the missing poster on top of the wall.
At first I wasn't sure if the clouds were supposed to be part of the tree or not. They look a little like grey matter and maybe stand out too much for how far away they are. Love everything else.

radshoe responds:

It's always great to read some constructive criticism from you. Thanks again! ;)

[Knight and Beard]

Congratulations on your accomplishments so far!

monsterparty responds:

Thank you! It has certainly been a journey!

[Surreal Planet]

It looks cool except for the cheesy sharpen effect on every edge.
I especially like how you painted the negative space between the branches instead of the branches themselves. Everything else is above average but it's a little too sketchy to give five stars.
I also think it would have benefited from being scaled down.

Sulup responds:

Yeah, I know what you mean, but i used a softer brush, and the sharpen just made it a bit crispier. It could use a little more detailing in the future. Thanks

[Long Drive]

As someone who finds both long drives and rainy days very relaxing, I approve this drawing. Faved!

YakovlevArt responds:

i love the rain. don't like driving in it as much though.

[[ BARD: THE WANDERING CARETAKER ]]

What does putting your contact in the middle of the drawing actually do? Besides ruin it.

The uploading issues could be due to adblock, ng uses a lot of scripts that are blocked by it.

The pose and perspective on this piece are cool but I think the readability in the middle suffers from lack of tonal variation and also that massive honking watermark.

CookieTheCrusher responds:

The text in the middle is called a watermark. The purpose of it is to deter people from stealing or taking credit for my work (which has happened far too many times). When it's printed in a physical form, the watermark will obviously not stay. I know it looks ugly, but it's just how I've been posting my digital work and so far it's worked very well : ^ )
There's a lot more I wanted to do with this piece before I decide to do anything more with it. Thanks for the feedback! I'll keep it in mind.

[We Both Escaped]

Is that an MA Music poster I see?

Very cool picture. It tells a lot by itself but I think it would better if the Neville had his paw on your foot like in the story. Great job!

[Happy Birthday Tom!]

You realize there was nothing stopping you from drawing yourself the same as Tom, right?

[Acid Attack]

You're starting to use colors much more conservatively, and only applying them where they're needed. On top of that your blending is getting phenomenal. I haven't seen the reference but the space between the boy and his mother and the other children gives it a sense of... loneliness? I can't find the word but you did a fantastic job here.

[Dragon Master]

I noticed you use almost the same color palette in every drawing, haha.
The drawing is crazy; off the wall bananas.
Maybe a little washed out but a simple filter adjustment could fix that if desired.
I tend not to like symmetry in drawings and you did seem to pay attention and break it up but overall it could use a little more divergence.
Still, it would be irresponsible to give this anything less than 5.