Luckytime's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Through the garden]

The cat looked like a girl to me, it needs to be more gay if it's going to work.

P-cate responds:

"Make it gayer" is on my to do list already. Thank you sir for the comment :^).

[blunfdserfgb]

The only complaint I have about your art is that you draw the same face over and over. Everything else is great.

[Skag Gully]

Very pleasing to the eye (and not just because there's a girl). But here's a few suggestions: Add more to the background, even if it's really quick and sloppy, don't leave that much space unused. I get the eyes are stylized but I think you went overboard with the lashes, more definition is needed in the contours AROUND the eyes to make them pop. Where the legs attach to the hips looks kinda lazy, plus it's hard to tell both her thighs apart. The wrist for the hand that's supporting her is a point of interest, so I noticed right away the anatomy in that area didn't look right. I think adding a few stray hairs on her head would really break up the monotony around there. That's as far as my drawing knowledge goes, I don't have diddly-squat to say about machinery. :I

[Squall - FF8 Junction System]

Nice resolution, I see what you did there ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
Seriously good art, what can I say?
NO LINES!!!

[Oath of Dagon]

Clever use of the border with the way you make certain elements overlap it.

Ccrawler responds:

Thanks! Added that detail just before sending the final image, and I think it really worked!

[Escape]

Well this drawing is pretty awesome, but I would change a few things. The dark areas would be darker, since there's a spotlight it could have been way more dramatic. The girl's right arm doesn't look as limp as the rest of her body, but that's a tricky part either way. Last thing is I wouldn't make them both faceless, without a face in the drawing it's harder to guess what's going on by myself. Maybe after he rescues her he opens his helmet to look at her with his own eyes, or maybe when ripping her from their machines he also removes her mask in the process. There are ways to make it work.

zephyo responds:

thank you. Yeah I thought about the dark thing, it definitely could be more focused. And the face yeah that would make it relatable. Woops! Will think about that next time I do something similar.

[Blue eyes]

Great work on your part. I've just always struggled to reconcile the use of a brush preset. If someone made a brush that created realistic looking hair in one stroke, would you use it? At what point do you say "you know what? This shortcut is making things too easy and is actually hurting me instead of helping."

Demp responds:

Yes, I may use it at some extent, but just because I know how hair works, not a master on it but I can kinda make it look decent. In my opinion using a "magic" brush that can recreate hair (or whatever) in a single stroke without having the knowledge of how hair works it will still look bad and will hurt your painting. So I never had that thought, I'm just using special brushes to speed up a process that I already know. Hope this answers it :)

[How Do I look?]

Your stuff is consistently funny, nice job :)

[Skrillex]

Hey, you don't have to like the content to appreciate the art. That's just the fanboy mindset.

YakovlevArt responds:

That's right. if it's good it's good. Thanks!

[Darth Vader Idle Animation]

The groove has taken over his body.