Luckytime's Reviews

[Winter Blues]

Sick style, lots of cool ideas, chill vibe and ambitious shots. It could use more polish but also more camerawork and tension. Some moments could be enhanced by simply moving the camera and cutting audio in/out.

When the wolf showed up a slow zoom-out and audio-cut as the scene changed, then cut the audio back in when it snaps it's jaws on the fish would create and release tension very effectively. With the smoker we were introduced to a new character so you could build tension by hiding their face with a slow camera pan from the bottom-up. Then there's the inverse situation with the ice skater, the cracking ice built tension because it indicated danger, but there was no release because it didn't lead anywhere! Just some ideas to think about!

JUS-TiME responds:

Awesome feedback thanks so much for this! I initially timed the audio cutting in for the wolfs jaw snap, but cutting from straight silence to music was awkward, so instead decided on the subtle fade in. Camera pan with the smoker on the ship would have been a really nice touch, kindof a shame I didn't think of that before aha. For the ice cracking I was definitely going for a little more ambiguity. Good stuff yaya :)

[OUTSIDER: A Pokémon Horror]

There are no human services because because sleeping, eating and pooping remind us of responsibilities and pokemon is all about escapism and forgetting your problems.

[Wiggle Room: Appendix B]

Very good impacts, love the tension/buildup/release and the tragic irony is the the cherry on top

[Gun Knight (by Stepford)]

Died on floor 69. Overall had fun. Would be cool if I could see what I was replacing while picking stuff up. Slowed down like crazy when things got busy... which was all the time on the later floors. Good job making something worth the time.

[UNITRES Dreams]

Visuals are hard to read. Nice game

[Gravity Hook]

Pros:
Aesthetics are nice
"feels" good to play

Cons:
Nothing happens for the first 5 seconds of the game
Can't cancel a grapple; once you click you're committed
Spike balls don't spawn where the arrow is, they just come out at random so its impossible to plan ahead

[Ping & Bounce]

This is very fun and loopable.

[Up & Up]

Very chill, especially love the opening.

YakovlevArt responds:

cool! I'm glad you dig it!

[Bang!]

this looks like ass

[Daffy Donald]

Can't tell it wasn't drawn by the original artists. Good work.

[Mushroom Kingdom guns]

You draw guns so well, and girls + guns is one of my favorite themes.