Luckytime's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Just a peek]

This is how you do traps, take notes.

P-cate responds:

http://nitrile.newgrounds.com/ im pretty sure this is how you properly do traps

[street player]

So mesmerizing. You should have put the cat from the missing poster on top of the wall.
At first I wasn't sure if the clouds were supposed to be part of the tree or not. They look a little like grey matter and maybe stand out too much for how far away they are. Love everything else.

radshoe responds:

It's always great to read some constructive criticism from you. Thanks again! ;)

[Knight and Beard]

Congratulations on your accomplishments so far!

monsterparty responds:

Thank you! It has certainly been a journey!

[Night]

Just wanted to weigh in on the first review. While you can call something stylistic, that doesn't exempt it from criticism. If something is drawn incorrectly on purpose it lands in the realm of "feelings".

In this particular instance it's my feeling that it looks worse than it would be hidden. Sometimes less is more, and I think that applies here. That's all I have to say.

[Surreal Planet]

It looks cool except for the cheesy sharpen effect on every edge.
I especially like how you painted the negative space between the branches instead of the branches themselves. Everything else is above average but it's a little too sketchy to give five stars.
I also think it would have benefited from being scaled down.

Sulup responds:

Yeah, I know what you mean, but i used a softer brush, and the sharpen just made it a bit crispier. It could use a little more detailing in the future. Thanks

[Long Drive]

As someone who finds both long drives and rainy days very relaxing, I approve this drawing. Faved!

YakovlevArt responds:

i love the rain. don't like driving in it as much though.

[[ BARD: THE WANDERING CARETAKER ]]

What does putting your contact in the middle of the drawing actually do? Besides ruin it.

The uploading issues could be due to adblock, ng uses a lot of scripts that are blocked by it.

The pose and perspective on this piece are cool but I think the readability in the middle suffers from lack of tonal variation and also that massive honking watermark.

CookieTheCrusher responds:

The text in the middle is called a watermark. The purpose of it is to deter people from stealing or taking credit for my work (which has happened far too many times). When it's printed in a physical form, the watermark will obviously not stay. I know it looks ugly, but it's just how I've been posting my digital work and so far it's worked very well : ^ )
There's a lot more I wanted to do with this piece before I decide to do anything more with it. Thanks for the feedback! I'll keep it in mind.

[Vodka]

This doesn't need to be A, you can make it M.

You seem really skilled and have a similar drawing style to what I like to do. Mainly, the linework is beautiful. If there is an easier way to get good lines without working the same line 100 times, do share. Glad to have you on Newgrounds! :)

[We Both Escaped]

Is that an MA Music poster I see?

Very cool picture. It tells a lot by itself but I think it would better if the Neville had his paw on your foot like in the story. Great job!

[Rain]

Not bad.

NektoInoi responds:

I really hope so XD Thanks)