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Loved it! The only thing that bothered me was the timing on certain scenes. I know there's a lot of detail that you worked on and you want to give people the chance to soak it all in but don't undermine the pace to give each frame equal screen time.

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The way it's constructed is genius, it's just delightful every time he looks up at his dad and smiles. Great job!

You're a gem.

That's some skill you got there.

This got 5th place? 5th place? P-Bot you're drunk. This has got to be one of the best submissions in the history of this site, what animations should be.

Rooshie responds:

You're too kind sir :' D

It's... really good, but a few small things hold it back. At some points the voices feel super monotone, like they have no life in them. The pacing and timing makes it really awkward and hard to follow what's going on, some scenes will linger for a bit longer than they should. But the animation is really nice and the backgrounds are especially great, probably the best thing about this. Also, I don't really like that "cute" character, I don't know why she's there.

You are the hero we need.

It gave me a bit of motion sickness, otherwise a fine cartoon.

AlecArts responds:

Thank you. Yeah I could dial down those camera moves for sure.

Everything was perfect.
But I'm curious about one thing: why mario characters?
What if you used your own original characters instead?

If you're a fan of your own work, then you'll be fine ~ Start small. If you can't, then start smaller ~ If you don't love what you put out, don't expect anyone else to

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