I like the character's personalities but I don't like the writing. It's not that it's bad, but it could flow a lot better.
I like the character's personalities but I don't like the writing. It's not that it's bad, but it could flow a lot better.
That was pretty funny.
5/5
That was unexpected, lol. I'd imagine they would prevent people from doing that though.
Video DownloadHelper, lol!
This is a weird situation because I want to like this but the drawings weigh the whole thing down so much. The cast and sound design is PERFECT, if I wasn't looking at the screen I would think I was listening to a high quality production. The drawings aren't bad, they just really don't fit the level of quality I hear in the sound and voices.
Also nice job for making something with a bit of length, it's hard to find longer animations here.
I appreciate your input and time to right something honest. Yeah, I don't disagree with anything you've said. At the moment this is something I'm doing while jugging a full time job, freelance work and book editing. Especially with long form animated series projects, it gets hard to make sure releases are consistent, and as long as I'm the only one animating. I've always tried to improve the quality of the visuals with each episode, pushing myself to a new level that I can balance. I'm moving over to Harmony for the next season since I think with Harmony I'll be able to have the animation match the illustration quality I've improved to. Time will tell. But I've always viewed this project as something that would improve over the course of production. Regardless, thank you for writing that out.
I'd like her more if there was more to her personality than just "I'm cute". The visuals are nice but some of the dialogue and how it's read felt kind of half-assed. Nice job overall.
It's got a subtle creepy vibe that isn't overplayed. Good job.
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