Luckytime's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Winter Blues]

Sick style, lots of cool ideas, chill vibe and ambitious shots. It could use more polish but also more camerawork and tension. Some moments could be enhanced by simply moving the camera and cutting audio in/out.

When the wolf showed up a slow zoom-out and audio-cut as the scene changed, then cut the audio back in when it snaps it's jaws on the fish would create and release tension very effectively. With the smoker we were introduced to a new character so you could build tension by hiding their face with a slow camera pan from the bottom-up. Then there's the inverse situation with the ice skater, the cracking ice built tension because it indicated danger, but there was no release because it didn't lead anywhere! Just some ideas to think about!

JUS-TiME responds:

Awesome feedback thanks so much for this! I initially timed the audio cutting in for the wolfs jaw snap, but cutting from straight silence to music was awkward, so instead decided on the subtle fade in. Camera pan with the smoker on the ship would have been a really nice touch, kindof a shame I didn't think of that before aha. For the ice cracking I was definitely going for a little more ambiguity. Good stuff yaya :)

[OUTSIDER: A Pokémon Horror]

There are no human services because because sleeping, eating and pooping remind us of responsibilities and pokemon is all about escapism and forgetting your problems.

[Wiggle Room: Appendix B]

Very good impacts, love the tension/buildup/release and the tragic irony is the the cherry on top

[The Magician & The Mother]

I enjoyed the atmosphere a lot. The animation wasn't my cup of tea but it did the job. Personally, I had a hard time following what was going on. I feel like there was too much exposition in too short a time OR there was not enough foundation between bursts of exposition. I watched it only once all the way through but I don't feel like I need to watch it again. My 2 cents.

FraserMcNiven responds:

Nice, thanks for the feedback.

[Ghastly: An Among Us Fan Animation]

GOD I love the vibe I get from this one. It's perfect.

[Son Of The Musk]

Absolutely phenomenal from top to bottom, down to the way he pauses to think every 2 seconds.

[I have to go very fast.]

lol

['From Frog to Fly (to Frog)']

Cute lil animation. If I had some feedback it would be the pace is slow for something that loops. And the music is kinda grating.

Butzbo responds:

Yeah I ended up giving it more pauses hoping that the action could read better, but considering that it loops, I could have tested it a bit more to see if it worked being faster. Thanks for the comment! :)

[Spooky Month - The Stars]

I haven't laughed this hard from something on newgrounds in a while. Holy shit that was amazing.

[Smash Kingdom: King K.Rool's Iron Gut]

The punchline made me lol.