Luckytime's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Randomminez]

This is so dope, I love the value distribution. The top is maybe missing 1 or 2 embers but that's hardly worth mentioning.

[tankman]

Looks more like veteran man to me.

4 stars because the pose is boring and misses the opportunity to communicate more about the character.

[Pixel Pika Panty Party!!!]

5 stars for mega milk.

[I Never Forgot Her]

Nice! ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
Also, welcome back.

Pelboy responds:

Yo! Thanks : )

[tree #1b]

Mother of God.

[Necrobot]

Nice, but the flat colors kind of ruin it for me.

[Coming down]

oh my fuck.

[Unchildlike]

wow, I love the personality. This stands out quite strongly as far as submissions go.

[Deathday party!]

Everything looks great except her face is bothering me. I would pull her jaw down and adjust the distance between her facial features.

[All Legends grow pale]

I parrot everything the previous review states except one thing. Because of the way the handle of the axe aligns with the clock in the middle ground, it is confusing to read the picture correctly. Even knowing that the two belong on very separate fields of distance, it is still hard to mentally separate them without any kind of distinguishing factor.

Some things you could have done to avoid this:
- Add fog, or lighten all the objects in the background to show distance
- Add substantially finer detail to background objects to show that they are far away in contrast with closer objects
- Rotate the axe so the handle is pointing slightly upward and avoid the alignment problem altogether

Otherwise a marvelous piece. Keep in mind I give more detailed critiques to those who look like they're trying because I want to help them out. Hoping to see more from you!