Luckytime's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Runic dust]

It still looks very sketchy, like it's not finished. Otherwise I like the colors you chose and the mysteriousness of those markings.

[New Pages]

This I like. The silhouette is pretty boring though and only further accentuated by the fact that it's a dark bold line.

jcarignan443 responds:

Thanks. Still experimenting with factors 😎🎅

[Hibike Euphonium - Kumiko]

Waifu material.
-1/2 star because lines are messy.

Edit: To be clear, you can get away with messy lines if you draw a picture big enough that it doesn't matter when it's downscaled (like this one, for example: https://www.newgrounds.com/art/view/mleth/brooke-what-did-i-do-last-night ) but this drawing is almost half the size so it becomes more of a point. Not a big deal either way, I love your art style overall. I just always try to leave people with something they can improve on.

MLeth responds:

Never heard anyone complain about messy lines so I'll give you that!

[Roll Legendsart]

Nice colors and composition, just gotta work on those hands some more. Another thing is that the smoke from the bike should not have darker lines further away from the exhaust point, you did it backwards. It should dissipate the further out it travels.

[Tranquility]

Good job. I like the concept but there's not enough of a separation between the water and the sky. Under normal conditions, there would be a gradient on one or both which helps the mind divide the two. Here, it looks like one big sky from far away and zooming only reveals a lack of detail.

My other criticism is that I don't think it needed to be drawn this big and in fact I think it hurts the picture. Drawing things big means you need to spend more time constructing the basic building blocks which means less time adding finer details. Part of my process when I'm starting a drawing to decide how big I'd like it to be, but also how big I'm capable of making it. If you Kept the man the same resolution he is and shrunk everything else around him, I have a feeling it would improve the composition and hide the lack of detail at the same time. And it would still end up huge so I don't see a downside.

EduardBey responds:

Thank you for the tips!

[Spooky Town]

I love it, you have a real knack for environments! Backgrounds often get overlooked so I always love seeing somebody who's committed to drawing them.

Sev4 responds:

Thank you so much \o/

[Dark Digital]

I thought Zephyo drew this... that's a compliment.

[Ocean Aquarium]

Sea life freaks me out, I can't look at this for too long.

[Ahahahahrrrrgh]

Great job with the subtle movement, really takes the whole thing to another level.

[The Void]

Good stuff, I think it could be improved though by making the edges a little darker. Hiding detail can make something even creepier. Keep it up!