Luckytime's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Shine on me]

I wouldn't stress about titles too much. I laughed at the "heavenly" tag. You could just call it Heavenly. Not much to say about it, keep doing what you're doing. But why has it been rigorous if you don't mind me asking?

zigan responds:

Thanks for the input. I may change the tag, it was in the late hours when I uploaded this and it may have been the "bloomy" aspect of the picture that made me think of something "heavenly" :P To answer your question though, I've just been having trouble finding the right times to get in the creative mood and draw/paint. It's really just been stress and handling time optimally. When I do decide to sit down and draw, it can also be hard to decide if I want to make a finished product or practice sketching. Often times I sketch for a little bit and then pick one of the subjects and sometimes put too much time into it when it ends up going nowhere but with the other piles of unfinished work. Its trouble finding a happy medium of drawing for fun and then drawing with discipline.

[[EEE] Rooowlll]

Fantastic, always a fan of your work.

[Leah]

Dope. The more I look at it though the more I agree with PlagueDocterNick that the eyes are a little slanted. Doesn't stop it from being a monster piece though.

[The Cathedral]

Very nice job. I'm kind of speechless at this. With a little more detail and additional elements (like maybe some chandeliers) this would get 5 stars from me. I'm a big fan of perspective shots that are done right.

[Everything and Nothing]

Colors and composition are good but I don't like that I can't read any of it, besides the character and the orb the rest just looks like a mess. Also I see the depth, but only so far as the middle ground. It doesn't feel like there's a foreground which bothers me.

ErrorCell responds:

Well you're pretty spot on with what I struggled with on this round. This scene was actually first created and rendered in 3D. I later painted right on top of it, added several layers of glow and glare... which is probably making this really awkward confusion between foreground background stuff. If I had another 3~4 hours of my life to remake this, that's basically what I'd work on.

Thanks for the commentary!

[Superman]

Gorgeous line art, I'm a huge fan of that black and white clean line style. The big black area on the bottom doesn't feel consistent with the rest of it though. Either make it all plain next time or add more black areas for balance.

TheIYouMe responds:

Yeah, I worried about it feeling inconsistent, when I was making it too. I wanted to try and make it as comic book-y as possible, which I'm still very much a novice at. But thanks for the feedback and the kind words!

[hold these a second plz thx]

I don't know if the jagged edges are part of the style or not, but I don't like them. Otherwise cool concept. Also I don't know if this should have an E rating.

ZabuJard responds:

good point lol i i will change the rating. thanks for your review as well!

[Gretchen]

The thing on her head is called a habit. I play a lot of The Binding of Isaac which is where I learned that. Lovely drawing, reminds me of Soul Eater's style.

P-cate responds:

oH YASSS, yeaaah, i was playing BOI yesterday and got that item, yes ofc xDm thanks for remembering me

[Gordon riding a bear]

Gordon Freeman riding a bear.

Why?

What a stupid question.

Rhunyc responds:

You can see into my mind?!?

[Double Date]

Great work! The background gives the impression that they are outside to me, but in reality it's just a few good color choices and simple shapes. May I ask how you usually decide what to do for the background? Is it planned at the start or improvised?

Cairos responds:

When it comes to backgrounds it's mostly based on what I feel is right. I keep it very concise but enough to give an idea of atmosphere.