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Instant 5 stars. I'm just curious about one thing. Why did you choose the red guy to be possessed?

Wow, not perfect drawing but the animation was good enough to make up for that. Not only that but this has got some inspiring directing.

railtoons responds:

Thanks, I really appreciate that. I love Brad Bird's directing style and wanted to use this project to very, very gradually begin developing a stronger shot composition like his.

First off this is original content so I'm already loving it, and you did a good job of capturing my attention. It was mostly good, but while the drawings are polished they don't seem complete stylistically, there are a lot of design choices that could be improved upon. Mostly though the writing needs a little work and it could be a lot better overall.

I don't think that joke could've worked with any format other than video, so thank you for making this.

This is gold, everything was perfect especially the pacing. Very relatable as well.

Yeah I didn't see that coming.

Greg-Vazquez responds:

Neither did I tbh

I was kind of annoyed watching this, it reminded me of A Clockwork Orange with its senseless bullying and violence. That's probably because of how shallow the characters are written, they have no motives, and even if motives are coming in the sequel that doesn't give the low-quality writing a pass here.

It sure looks good though, I'm sure you could sell this just based on screenshots if you wanted. Animation is smooth and characters are decently expressive, you can get a good sense of what's going on in their heads without any voice acting.

The reuse of clips was annoying too, next time I'd go with a recap or just plan better? Nice job overall.

Quality.

Quality.

I like the faces. It's just another animation about sex though.

If you're a fan of your own work, then you'll be fine ~ Start small. If you can't, then start smaller ~ If you don't love what you put out, don't expect anyone else to

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