I totally agree, this is your best work yet. It's not just the animation, it's the storyboarding too. You seem to be a natural director, the sort of person who could head a team working on a project. I would love to work with you on something one day. It's awesome you learned a lot and hopefully this is just the start of even better things.
Thank you, I'm trying my best to improve myself in all aspects of animation and film making!
This reminds me of the last episode of Futurama. Kind of odd to see Mccree and Tracer together, but in your style, anything can be good. But yeah, the story is undermined by the fact that death is meaningless for her. The visuals were on point though.
God I love this.
thank you :)
I liked it.
@Furious-Monkey That was quite a long review. You ain't a talker, are you?
If I just say this is good then it will be hard to tell just how good I think it is. This is one of the best things on Newgrounds, the dedication to the source material is astonishing.
Some of the voicelines were not my thing, but everything else was totally my thing.
I'm just going to write what I don't like first before I forget, the voice is appropriate but the quality of the sound file is poor, and the delivery of the lines and the grunts during the action sequence were both mediocre. The sound design is good in some areas but totally misses the mark in others, like at 00:20 when she delivers a headbutt and the best you could come up with was a twig snap. I don't know if the plot is supposed to be tongue-in-cheek but god I hope so.
If those things were on the level of the animation you would have yourself a classic right here. The most important of those is the sound design, I loved the face-grind sound effect at 00:12, the rest just needed to be as pleasing as that. I don't want to take away the emphasis on how much I enjoyed the animation though, one of the best animations I've seen in recent memory.
Makes me cry to this day, and not just a little bit, I mean like sobbing.
As soon as I saw the title I gave this a 5, it something that a lot of of creators either miss out on or don't put enough though into. As far as the contents of the film, I wasn't disappointed. I pretty much agree with everything makestuff said. Never stop experimenting.
Thank you for your kind words!
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