Luckytime's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Gill (guardian of Dipcus pond)]

Love the lighting and the way the cast shadow falls over his feet. If it weren't for the background trees looking a little flat you'd get five stars.

fondimon responds:

I changed the trees :) hopefully this looks better. thanks for the feedback, i appreciate it!

[9fatherin6towersforthe3headedGOD]

I love how unsettling and demented this looks. Great job with the hatching, you really nailed it! With something this unorthodox, it's hard for me to give it an accurate rating without considering it for a good while. I will say that while drawing it at this scale is impressive, it doesn't exactly add anything to the art itself except making it easier to print. Save for that, you could have made the process go by a lot faster.

dogmuth-behedog responds:

Thanks :D.
I made the hatching in traditional in a letter format paper.

[DnD commission]

No complaints. Great job!

Crustofatanman responds:

lol thank you

[Rose Gold Promises]

Beautiful imagery. Reminds me of this classic: https://www.newgrounds.com/art/view/otone/preface-cover

[Yuel]

No complaints, good job!

[Todoroki]

Just wanted to say that I enjoy your art a great deal and I think you're very skilled (had the urge to say "talented"). This particular piece is very lovely, design-wise, but I think the lighting could have been done better or pushed further. When something like energy hands extending into deep parallaxes are involved I think you basically have no choice but to make it as flashy as possible. You got some motion lines and hatching, but most of the shading is cell-based. I think adding a gradient layer on top with some vivid light would make it exponentially better. It would only take like 10 minutes.

Gloss responds:

I disagree with you, it would look much worse, especially for the specific anime aesthetic I was going for here, try it and see for yourself. Thank you for your input though

[I consume, Jon. It's what I do.]

I want to favorite all of these but I must resist.

[Hollow by thy name]

Great imagery, good polish, solid execution (lol) I just don't dig the way jesus looks lacking in weight. It's obvious there was an attempt to make him integrated with the goat but I feel like there should be more instances of skindentation, despite how gaunt he is. His feet look nice and natural but his left legs don't look like they're supported. His thighs and calves look more meaty when compared to his torso. Overall, pretty minor complaints.

[Wood Ducks Falling]

You would be an evil genius if you had made it 10,801 pixels high.

[Narehate Princess]

Extremely good use of color and composition, well done!